I alwanys go to your site Daniel and read your awesome poems and then I feel like all my posts are boring and shallow because yours are so deep- so from now on, i vow to write a poem on every post untill i start to get better at it. they will probably be really stupid and boring, but i will work on it.
Im different from alot of my peers,
i have a hope no one can cease.
I dont just wallow in my problems,
I offer them up to my Father.
He erases the pain,
and gives contentment.
I know He will always be ther for me,
Every step along the way.
Ok, that was not the gratest, but it was only my first attempt at it-maybe itll be better next time
2 comments:
Hey you don't need a poem on every post to make them deep.
Just write about something you feel strongly about. Besides your posts aren't really all that shallow, I think they are good.
ha! kewl one michelle im really glad, the thing is wen i started 2 write poems an articles an all that "deep" stf, i startd witnessing changes in the way i think and express myself, its kewl cause wen u put sum stf down on paper, its sumtimes easier than saying the stf. which is wat i like to do, an poems are just another way of praising God and thanking him for stf and things! so just think about God an what He's dun 4 u and write about that, write about issues and problems u hav or are going thro, it sum times just flows once u get going u cant stop and with more practice u'll become an ace*
God Bles5 hope al goes wel!
luv dan
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